My describing story
I was working with Mrs S and My group looked at a picture and this is what I wrote.
One day I was walking down the forest and I saw green trees. The trees were as green as the grass. I saw a lake that was blue as the sky.. And I saw a funny looking monster that was holding a dead rat. I saw a bight light shinning down. By the tree there was a person with a bow and arrow.
Hi. Divana i liked your imagination and you made your story short and i liked how you said i saw a bright light and that the monster was holding a Rat.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Divanna.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have put adjectives into this story
I am looking forwards looking at your next story and what it is about.
From Catie